Mulling over metre & rhyme (iambic pentametre, feminine endings, sprung rhythms), good & bad rhymes (is there such a thing?) & the humorous nuggets of wisdom found in Stephen Fry’s The Ode Less Travelled has kept me suitably occupied these past weeks. The exercises found here have brought me back to the basics of poetry creation which have been at the same time enlightening and exhausting.
So in response to September’s A and I Poetry Challenge, I cheekily submitted a quatrain I’d written as part of my studies, although what was called for was a limerick. Older Daughter frowned rather alarmingly at this blatant disregard for the task set, so I thought I’d better set things right and submit the above Limerick.
Feature Photo: “Nurturing” by Vanessa Marston, Frangipani Lawn, Singapore Botanic Gardens
I think you did a great job with the limerick!
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Thanks so much Miriam!
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This is soooo good! I find a sort of meta reality to this poem- so lovely all the same ! Always love seeing your creativity !
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Thank you for your support and sweet encouragement!
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Nice job!
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Thanks so much!
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True words, Ju-Lyn. I had a chuckle at your daughter’s reaction at changing the rules!!
The limerick is an interesting poetic form. Appearing so simple, yet can be so complex. One must be succinct, perfect the rhyme, while at the same time, convey a message. Not easy to do and you have nailed it perfectly!! I have been moving house so the September round up post has been slightly delayed. A pingback should be coming your way soon!
Thanks so much for being a regular participant and sharing your words with us.
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Thank you for hosting this challenge despite the Move. Hope you are all settled in now!
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Not yet, Ju Lyn. Plans have gone a little awry but we are still moving just to a different place. Hopefully next week.
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Oh no! Moving hiccups!!!!! Urghhhh! Hope it goes better …
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Gosh. It is better for me not to answer that this week….. heheh!
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Hoping by now, all is well and moving along space!
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Slowly coming together. We are in the new place but still have to move the last if the furniture and the stash of non essential stuff…somewhere!!!!!
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Cheering you on, Amanda! Hope all is sorted and you are settled in!
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That is so kind, Ju-Lyn. Thanks ever so much.
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Great job!
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Thank you so much for the encouragement!
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